Anonymous Posted 11 years agoGrammar
Need for restate the subject
Hi. I've seen in research articles some examples like the following:
In this work, 14 types of poems were considered. Among them, 4 are Japanese and 2 are Korean. All the remaining types are from Europe.
However, I've read an article about writing in English that states that it's important to restate the subject. For instance:
In this work, 14 types of poems were considered. Among them, 4 types are Japanese and 2 types are Korean. All the remaining types are from Europe.
I've thought that modern English was more direct, thus allowing to omit "types" in the example above. Am I wrong? Is it better to repeat?
Thank you!