Aismile Posted 22 years ago
My Second poem--Wish
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Aismile
Wish
Wish nights could be shorter
Then I would sleep less
Wish daytimes could be longer
Then I would be awake more
To have the due time to talk with the birds
And chase with the winds And kiss with all sorts of creatures in life
But, unfortunately, it is not
And life is not made of wishes
The best is to take the most of everything at hands
And I am long for that
Wish I could be blind for just one day
Then I would appreciate by heart the richness of color
And the beauty of creation through the hands of nature
Wish I could be deaf for just one day
Then I would never be complaining for this amount of noise
But try to resonate with that sound And dance with that rhythm of the notes
Wish I could be handicapped for just one day
Then I would at least know what it means of wholeness
But, fortunately, I am not And life remains what it is supposed to be
Because we are living at the present
And present is what life intends to be And I am long for that Today, present, and right now
Aismile
Wish
Wish nights could be shorter
Then I would sleep less
Wish daytimes could be longer
Then I would be awake more
To have the due time to talk with the birds
And chase with the winds And kiss with all sorts of creatures in life
But, unfortunately, it is not
And life is not made of wishes
The best is to take the most of everything at hands
And I am long for that
Wish I could be blind for just one day
Then I would appreciate by heart the richness of color
And the beauty of creation through the hands of nature
Wish I could be deaf for just one day
Then I would never be complaining for this amount of noise
But try to resonate with that sound And dance with that rhythm of the notes
Wish I could be handicapped for just one day
Then I would at least know what it means of wholeness
But, fortunately, I am not And life remains what it is supposed to be
Because we are living at the present
And present is what life intends to be And I am long for that Today, present, and right now
Top answer
Umh !! Your poem really make the world much more beautiful. There is nothing bad actually, just think possitively for everything, this world would be very beautiful, is it right Aismile?
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Umh !!
Your poem really make the world much more beautiful. There is nothing bad actually, just think possitively for everything, this world would be very beautiful, is it right Aismile?
Your poem really make the world much more beautiful. There is nothing bad actually, just think possitively for everything, this world would be very beautiful, is it right Aismile?
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Hi, Candle,
Yes. You are right. The beauty of simplicity and the profoundity of simplicity. Just keep our big smile. That's why I name myself "I smile" or "Ai Smile" since Ai is also my given name.
thanks so much for your comments
Cheers
Aismile
Yes. You are right. The beauty of simplicity and the profoundity of simplicity. Just keep our big smile. That's why I name myself "I smile" or "Ai Smile" since Ai is also my given name.
thanks so much for your comments
Cheers
Aismile
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Wao! Aismile, your wishes are simple and meaningful.
Keep up sharing of your nice thoughtful wishes.
Kind Regards
Raji
Keep up sharing of your nice thoughtful wishes.
Kind Regards
Raji
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AismileWish nights could be shorter Then I would sleep less Wish daytimes could be longer Then I would be awake more
I guess that like me, you live near the equator.
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