Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
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My Resume of the "Pride and Prejudice."
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00 I wrote a resume of the Jane Austen novel "Pride and Prejudice." Please, correct my sentence structures. 02 br
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00 My resume: 02 br
00 Two lovers have to overcome the pride, for the female hero, and the prejudice, for the male hero, before being together. When he first meets her, he refuses her company for he finds her very common and not handsome. He has not tried to hide his motives to her. Her pride gets hurt. But not long before, the man falls in love with her. His prejudice holds him back to assume his love for her. Even when he proposes her the marriage for the first time, his prejudice is still tangible. The conclusion of that story does not take end at the first marriage proposal for she refuses it. As the story continues, his prejudice disappears. And only when her pride was cured that she consents to marry him. 02 br
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00 Thank you very much, 02 br
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00 I wrote a resume of the Jane Austen novel "Pride and Prejudice." Please, correct my sentence structures. 02 br
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00 My resume: 02 br
00 Two lovers have to overcome the pride, for the female hero, and the prejudice, for the male hero, before being together. When he first meets her, he refuses her company for he finds her very common and not handsome. He has not tried to hide his motives to her. Her pride gets hurt. But not long before, the man falls in love with her. His prejudice holds him back to assume his love for her. Even when he proposes her the marriage for the first time, his prejudice is still tangible. The conclusion of that story does not take end at the first marriage proposal for she refuses it. As the story continues, his prejudice disappears. And only when her pride was cured that she consents to marry him. 02 br
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00 Thank you very much, 02 br
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00 Spoonfedbaby 02 br
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) 02 br 02 br 00 Two lovers have to overcome pride, for the female hero, and prejudice, for the male hero, before being together. When first he meets her, he refuses her company, for he finds her very common and not handsome [*pretty]. He has not tried to hide his motives from her.
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0 My resume: 02 br
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00 (I would call this an "abstract", not a "resume".) 02 br
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00 Two lovers have to overcome pride, for the female hero, and prejudice, for the male hero, before being together. When first he meets her, he refuses her company, for he finds her very common and not handsome [*pretty]. He has not tried to hide his motives from her. Her
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00 (I would call this an "abstract", not a "resume".) 02 br
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00 Two lovers have to overcome pride, for the female hero, and prejudice, for the male hero, before being together. When first he meets her, he refuses her company, for he finds her very common and not handsome [*pretty]. He has not tried to hide his motives from her. Her
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0 Hi, 02 br
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00 I've bolded some of your errors for you. Hope that helps. 02 br
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01 u 00 Both the hero and the heroine have to overcome 02 u 00 pride and prejudice 00 before being together. When he first meets her, he 01 u 00 considers himself too good for anybody 02 u 00 refuses her company for he finds her very commo
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00 I've bolded some of your errors for you. Hope that helps. 02 br
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01 u 00 Both the hero and the heroine have to overcome 02 u 00 pride and prejudice 00 before being together. When he first meets her, he 01 u 00 considers himself too good for anybody 02 u 00 refuses her company for he finds her very commo
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00 Thanks to Eimai_Anglos and julielai for their corrections. 02 br
00 I tried to understand the corrections and rewrite the abstract. 02 br
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00 First revised abstract: 02 br
00 Two lovers have to overcome pride for the heroine and prejudice for the hero, before being together. When first he meets her, he r
00 Thanks to Eimai_Anglos and julielai for their corrections. 02 br
00 I tried to understand the corrections and rewrite the abstract. 02 br
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00 First revised abstract: 02 br
00 Two lovers have to overcome pride for the heroine and prejudice for the hero, before being together. When first he meets her, he r
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