So, here's the thread I'll be filling with my lyrics. I'd like to see someone's comments about it.
First one:
No(W) More Hate
I Forgive you all Will you forgive me For all the things I have done To enable your anger
Will you demand for contribution? Or let me live My past life of wrath and distrust?
I have no will to change me Though, I’ve no will to change you
I give it up No more ‘messiah’ shit for me
I won’t tell you what you should do If you want it, you’ll get it yourself I will not walk around you For the sake of my profit I realized that I have failed All attempts of getting out of my grave I’ve lost my rage but still I won’t claim that I have no more hate
Invidious face of life Rubs on my leg Like a shadow of black cat
Deflections of my mind Raise a new god from the ashes Of hatred and depravity
I have no will to cure me Though, I see no way of doing it
I clear my mind from the Rust of compassion But still I don’t care about you
I won’t tell you what you should do If you want it, you’ll get it yourself I will not walk around you For the sake of my profit I realized that I have failed All attempts of getting out of my grave I’ve lost my rage but still I won’t claim that I have no more hate
Top answer
I like it. I like songs about hatred in general, like Duskmon's theme song in Digimon Frontier.
— Monox D. I-Fly
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