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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago

My first poem: Foth

I tried writing a poem. I wrote it so that it is open to a lot of interpretation by the reader. Foth is not a defined word and so can mean whatever you want it to mean!

Cruel is this world,
and cruel am I,
yet I do not befit here
tells me; my discerning eye,

to this world of wroth
abound with froth,
foth! Is this you?
Cometh forth unto me,
prove your love for me
is but thrice times three,

Oh how she delights
in my timely passing,
Tricksters nigh!
Foth! Is this you?
Do not pass by.

and so my dear foth,
from this word I depart
baring the sins I fought,
foth! I yell over yonder
for now I am I bought,
  

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Anonymous open to a lot of interpretation by the reader I'd just call it impenetrable.

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Anonymous open to a lot of interpretation by the reader
I'd just call it impenetrable.
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Well I realize 'thrice times three' is nine. So I added another line 'allow our love to benign'. 'Be-nign' or benign? There are two meanings to this! The poem is most likely about two lovers. A man and a woman called 'Foth'. The man is a cruel man and he is tricked by the vices in life 'Tricksters nigh', perhaps he cheats on 'Foth' with another woman, and so, when he dies and is 'bought' by death,
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Dream and Dreams, silly dreams.
It seems, it seems, it seems,
Crazy crazy dreams
For sure, dream seem and smarter mere dreams
But they should seem like dreams
I have dreams that seem like dreams that seem
Seem dreams
Dream Seems
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