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Virgogz Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

My dream job

For the first time, I've written a brief paragraph about my dream job as my writing exercise. Can someone check this for me, please?

I always wanted to become a Paleontologist. I found this job was very interesting, fun and quite adventurous. I love to understand all the history of life on earth and I think it would be amazing if we can find out what really happened on earth in the earlier days.

Unfortunately, I knew that I wouldn't be able to reach my dream job because of several reasons. When I was in school, although I loved all those science subjects, I'm not really into Mathematic (which is one of the important subjects of requirement). Besides, I found out that Paleontology Course hadn't been offered in any universities in my country. The only way to further studies in this field was by studying abroad, which I knew I couldn't afford it. Other than that, limited job opportunities also made me realized that this job would be always remains in my dreams ever since.

I really appreciate any helps. Many thanks in advance.
  

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I always wanted to become a Paleontologist. I found believe this job was to be very interesting, fun and quite adventurous. I would love to understand all the history of life on earth, and I think it would be amazing if we could can find out what really happened in the earlier days on earth.

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I always wanted to become a Paleontologist. I found believe this job was to be very interesting, fun and quite adventurous. I would love to understand all the history of life on earth, and I think it would be amazing if we could can find out what really happened in the earlier days on earth.

Unfortunately, I knew that I wouldn't be able to
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Sorry to be picky Dave but I feel there are still some bugs.

I always wanted to become a Paleontologist. I found that this job is very interesting, fun and quite adventurous. I would love to understand all the history of life on earth, and I think it would be amazing if we could find out what really happened in the earlier days on earth.

Unfortunately, I knew that I wouldn't be
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Hello Dave,

mmm... too many mistakes....Emotion: sad
many thanks for your help and time....
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Zafar,

Many thanks for your help and time....Emotion: smile
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hi zafar,

I want to ask something.... Why you say any university here..... not universities....? Is university is uncountable noun? Can you explain it?
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It's OK! Keep posting here, and you'll learn your mistake! This is where you learn your mistake. Emotion: smile
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any unversity is correct.

Because you wrote "any" Emotion: smile Hope that helped.
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Dave Phillips we can't say : '' I believe this job to be very interesting .''
we say : '' I think that this job is an interesting one ''
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