Dave Health Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
My Diabetes Article
Hello,
I am really appreciate if someone can help me to correct grammar of this attached article. I need to hand it in this week.
Thank you,
Dave
I am really appreciate if someone can help me to correct grammar of this attached article. I need to hand it in this week.
Thank you,
Dave
Top answer
Please write it as text if you want us to fix any parts but from what I read it seems quite well written. Its seems out of place to include "polyuria" with "want to eat a lot". Either it should be all technical or all common language.
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Please write it as text if you want us to fix any parts but from what I read it seems quite well written. Its seems out of place to include "polyuria" with "want to eat a lot". Either it should be all technical or all common language. Maybe "produce large amounts of dilute urine" would be better. And debold the bullet points- the numbered dots- and add some descriptor text in bold instead. I th
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