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Essay & Composition Writing
My Childhood Experience
In the cold, brisk airs of China, I was in the fields with my parents. I was wears old sandals made of bamboo that are worn-out from hiking across acres of crops. My clothes are thin and ineffective to the temperature of the season. Luckily, over these clothes I have a sweater made of wool to keep me warm. Nor did I need to, as my family was going to harvest the rice fields and chop some wood for the incoming season.
After walking in the fields for some time, it makes me want to explore the forest. The forest, a dark and gloomy place filled with trees to make a plentiful supply of wood for a couple of weeks. I know my father stay in the forest in that afternoon with an axe to gather wood for the coming winter.
here is my 2 paragraph, i still need 1 paragraph to finish of but can you guys check it first .. thx
After walking in the fields for some time, it makes me want to explore the forest. The forest, a dark and gloomy place filled with trees to make a plentiful supply of wood for a couple of weeks. I know my father stay in the forest in that afternoon with an axe to gather wood for the coming winter.
here is my 2 paragraph, i still need 1 paragraph to finish of but can you guys check it first .. thx
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Me again.. I revised it In the cold, brisk air of China, I was in the fields with my parents. I was wearing old sandals made of bamboo that were worn-out from the exhausting hike across the long acres of our plantation.
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Me again..
I revised it
In the cold, brisk air of China, I was in the fields with my parents. I was
wearing old sandals made of bamboo that were worn-out from the exhausting
hike across the long acres of our plantation. My clothes are thin and not
suitable to wear at this type of season. Luckily, over the poorly-made
clothes, I have a sweater made of
I revised it
In the cold, brisk air of China, I was in the fields with my parents. I was
wearing old sandals made of bamboo that were worn-out from the exhausting
hike across the long acres of our plantation. My clothes are thin and not
suitable to wear at this type of season. Luckily, over the poorly-made
clothes, I have a sweater made of
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