Mr. Tom Posted 8 years ago
Vocabulary

My boredom started getting reflected in my writing.

Hi

Do the underlined parts work naturally? Any suggestions please?

(-- said by a novelist)

My boredom and reluctance to write started getting reflected in my work.

My boredom and reluctance to write started reflecting in my work.

Thanks,

Tom

  

Top answer

That's actually ambiguous. Do you mean that your writings started reflecting those or that it became impacted by them? I suggest you change the phrasing.

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That's actually ambiguous. Do you mean that your writings started reflecting those or that it became impacted by them? I suggest you change the phrasing.