My 3rd essay

Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we just watch television.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?
Technology is important in our life to expand our perceptions, to experience something that is new in our life and to make our life more easy. There is always limit in everything ; in other word, it is always bad, when we addictive to something. As an example, the water, in which is the item that keep us surviving at this very moment, when we over-drink it, it will affects the human body indeed.
I believe that the Television is a good tech. It is where we watch the news and what is happening in the world right now. In fact there is an advantage and disadvantage of the television, television holds a different TV shows and programs appear to make people addictive to it as to leave other important activities, such as, family, school, job..etc . In which the family becomes separated and create an an atmosphere of crisis.
Personally, I have sort of habit that when I am addictive to something, I can easily forget about the other activities .
A friend of mine once told me about his suffering in this life and problem that occurred with his family because of a few of TV's show, and what will it be if he didnt gets involved in it . Televsion affects the child brain, and he becomes sluggish in his studies during his growth .
At last, Television is good tech to use it, but families are important to build happiness.

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