Luve Posted 21 years ago
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Mr.P, please help me over this paragraph.
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00 I began buying stocks which are best known and had a good performance record. My strategy and stocks I picked have paid off. The graph shows a positive sign in earning money for my first two weeks. After selling all stocks, I started looking for a stock that has a large return in a short period. I noticed a few stocks that have just dropped their price per share and expected that they will go up again. I lost almost 30% of my money with this strategy until I decided to change a new strategy. Finally, I short sell one stock that had a high intraday return. I success with this new strategy and start hunted for another stocks with the same categories which fit my new strategy. Finally, I ended up by gained more than 70% for last two weeks only. My graph going up, down, and up again while the S&P 500 index and t-bill are very stable. 0-
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00 I began buying stocks which are best known and had a good performance record. My strategy and stocks I picked have paid off. The graph shows a positive sign in earning money for my first two weeks. After selling all stocks, I started looking for a stock that has a large return in a short period. I noticed a few stocks that have just dropped their price per share and expected that they will go up again. I lost almost 30% of my money with this strategy until I decided to change a new strategy. Finally, I short sell one stock that had a high intraday return. I success with this new strategy and start hunted for another stocks with the same categories which fit my new strategy. Finally, I ended up by gained more than 70% for last two weeks only. My graph going up, down, and up again while the S&P 500 index and t-bill are very stable. 0-
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0 Hello luve 02 br 02 hr 02 br 02 br 00 I began by buying stocks which were the best known and had a good performance record. The stocks I picked did well, so my strategy paid off. The graph shows a positive return for the first two weeks.
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0 Hello luve 02 br
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00 I began by buying stocks which were the best known and had a good performance record. The stocks I picked did well, so my strategy paid off. The graph shows a positive return for the first two weeks. After selling all my stocks, I looked for a stock that would perform well over a short period. I noticed a few stocks that had
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00 I began by buying stocks which were the best known and had a good performance record. The stocks I picked did well, so my strategy paid off. The graph shows a positive return for the first two weeks. After selling all my stocks, I looked for a stock that would perform well over a short period. I noticed a few stocks that had
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