Kael Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
Motivation Letter to Volunteer Program?
Good afternoon. Can you help me with my Motivation Letter to Short-Term Volunteer Program, please? I have a strong feeling that this sounds like a text of ten-year-old child… How can I improve it?
Dear Sir/Madam
I am %MYNAME%, a 21 year old %NATIONALITY% from %CITYNAME%. I’m looking for opportunity to participate in your volunteer program. Let me tell a little about myself and the reasons why I’ve applied.
This year will be very special for me. I'm from a very poor background and my greatest dream was always to get a good education. For the last few years I have been working on the application to the U.S. colleges, and finally will send it this fall. I have a little more time and there are several important things that I need to accomplish.
I've been studying English since elementary school, but I have never been in a foreign language environment. I find it necessary for myself to improve my language and communication skills, and your program will give me this opportunity.
The second important thing is that I can experience myself in an international environment. In case of success and acceptance into college, I’ll find myself in a very diverse environment. I'm incredibly excited that in your camp, I’ll be able to spend a month working among people from other countries, learning their culture, worldview, communicate with them and achieve our goals together. This is perhaps the main task that I would like to accomplish.
Finally, the volunteer movement is respected, especially overseas. So, it's the experience which I find necessary to acquire for myself. I hope that you are interested in my candidacy, and will help me achieve the goals. I will try to become a worthy member of your camp and will be happy to bring a piece of my culture to the group.
Thank you for your time. I look forward to your reply.
Faithfully Yours,
Dear Sir/Madam
I am %MYNAME%, a 21 year old %NATIONALITY% from %CITYNAME%. I’m looking for opportunity to participate in your volunteer program. Let me tell a little about myself and the reasons why I’ve applied.
This year will be very special for me. I'm from a very poor background and my greatest dream was always to get a good education. For the last few years I have been working on the application to the U.S. colleges, and finally will send it this fall. I have a little more time and there are several important things that I need to accomplish.
I've been studying English since elementary school, but I have never been in a foreign language environment. I find it necessary for myself to improve my language and communication skills, and your program will give me this opportunity.
The second important thing is that I can experience myself in an international environment. In case of success and acceptance into college, I’ll find myself in a very diverse environment. I'm incredibly excited that in your camp, I’ll be able to spend a month working among people from other countries, learning their culture, worldview, communicate with them and achieve our goals together. This is perhaps the main task that I would like to accomplish.
Finally, the volunteer movement is respected, especially overseas. So, it's the experience which I find necessary to acquire for myself. I hope that you are interested in my candidacy, and will help me achieve the goals. I will try to become a worthy member of your camp and will be happy to bring a piece of my culture to the group.
Thank you for your time. I look forward to your reply.
Faithfully Yours,
Top answer
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Kael Smith and I'm a 21-year-old high-school student from Capetown, South Africa . I would like to apply for a position in your volunteer program this coming summer. I'm from a very poor background and my greatest dream has always been to get a good education.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Kael Smith and I'm a 21-year-old high-school student from Capetown, South Africa . I would like to apply for a position in your volunteer program this coming summer.
I'm from a very poor background and my greatest dream has always been to get a good education. For the last few years, I have been working on applications to U.S. colleges and will submit them th
My name is Kael Smith and I'm a 21-year-old high-school student from Capetown, South Africa . I would like to apply for a position in your volunteer program this coming summer.
I'm from a very poor background and my greatest dream has always been to get a good education. For the last few years, I have been working on applications to U.S. colleges and will submit them th
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