I'm a slovak graduated girl who would like to send a motivation letter to a company in english language. I am now studying english but still it is not perfect and I am working hard to make this letter sound perfect. But i need help!
Could you please take a quick look at it and tell me what you think?
Many thanks in advance.
Maria Wiedermannova
Dear sir or madam,
Having seen details of a vacancy (Assistant Manager Customer Satisfaction) advertised by PROFESIA, I would like to apply for the position.
The opportunity to become a part of your team I would appreciate, because you are a well know company with high quality production and the automotive industry is the most dynamic sector in the last decade in the worldwide. (my final assesment at the University was about the changes in the Slovak industry after the entry to the EU – especially in the automobile industry).
The main task which the position include, respond to my preferences and professional orientation and I believe I can be an asset for your company and for his development.
To my personal characteristics belong loyality, communication, responsibility, team player and positive approach to the job task solution.
I am look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Top answer
Dear Sir or Madam: I would like to apply for the position of Assistant Manager, Customer Satisfaction, as advertised by PROFESIA. I would like the opportunity to become a part of your team, because you are a well-known company with high quality products, and the automotive industry has been the most dynamic sector worldwide in the last decade. My final research at university was on the topic of the changes in Slovak industry after its entry into the EU, with particular focus on the automobile industry.
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I would like to apply for the position of Assistant Manager, Customer Satisfaction, as advertised by PROFESIA.
I would like the opportunity to become a part of your team, because you are a well-known company with high quality products, and the automotive industry has been the most dynamic sector worldwide in the last decade. My final research at university