Motivation letter for busary

i m applying for a busary and they need a motivation letter why i think i deserve the busary,

here is my letter can you please correct me



I am writing in response to the ad that you placed with<<newspaper name>> about the job of a Nursing Student in your hospital. I was really waiting for an opportunity like this; hence I would be very pleased to apply for this position.

I have undergone training as a nurse and I also hold a diploma in nursing . I have good communication, organization and communication skills and possess all the qualities that a good nurse should have.

I am registered with SA nurse council and I have the training requirements that are needed by professional nurses. I would really enjoy working with your hospital.

Thanks for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,