UncleMat Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
Motivation letter - correction please ;)
I would like kindly ask someone to check briefly my cover letter and propose some corrections
Thanks in advance :]
Uncle Mat
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Dear Sirs,
I am writing to express my interest in the post advertised by your company for a Laboratory Engineer of CompanyName as it precisely fits my career plans. I have enclosed my resume so that you might become familiar with my qualifications in the field of metrology and laboratory work.
I hold a Ph.D. from the UniversityName and recently have a fellowship from OrganinzationName, as well.
Throughout my studies at UniversityName in the Nuclear Engineering area and experience working for companies listed in my CV I have learned not only the scientific and technical skills that are fundamentally important , but also how to collaborate with fellow researchers and scientists both in media field and in the laboratory.
Your Company's need for a flexible, enthusiastic, and motivated team player is exactly the type of position I desire. I am prepared to work hard in order to meet the high standards that the CompanyName is known for. I am confident that I can be an active, open-minded and useful member of your team. I hope you will agree that my skills would be an asset to your Company. I would like to add my knowledge of metrology, physics, statistics and in doing so help the existing members of CompanyName to succeed in their scientific endeavours. I also believe that my education, diverse scientific and technical background, experience in laboratory work and overall my drive to succeed in the experimental and theoretical work would fit in well with the ideals of your CompanyName.
I would welcome the opportunity to contact with you to discuss your particular needs and how I may help CompanyName successfully carry out its mission as the leading in power and automation technologies. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
FirstName LastName
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Thanks in advance :]
Uncle Mat
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Dear Sirs,
I am writing to express my interest in the post advertised by your company for a Laboratory Engineer of CompanyName as it precisely fits my career plans. I have enclosed my resume so that you might become familiar with my qualifications in the field of metrology and laboratory work.
I hold a Ph.D. from the UniversityName and recently have a fellowship from OrganinzationName, as well.
Throughout my studies at UniversityName in the Nuclear Engineering area and experience working for companies listed in my CV I have learned not only the scientific and technical skills that are fundamentally important , but also how to collaborate with fellow researchers and scientists both in media field and in the laboratory.
Your Company's need for a flexible, enthusiastic, and motivated team player is exactly the type of position I desire. I am prepared to work hard in order to meet the high standards that the CompanyName is known for. I am confident that I can be an active, open-minded and useful member of your team. I hope you will agree that my skills would be an asset to your Company. I would like to add my knowledge of metrology, physics, statistics and in doing so help the existing members of CompanyName to succeed in their scientific endeavours. I also believe that my education, diverse scientific and technical background, experience in laboratory work and overall my drive to succeed in the experimental and theoretical work would fit in well with the ideals of your CompanyName.
I would welcome the opportunity to contact with you to discuss your particular needs and how I may help CompanyName successfully carry out its mission as the leading in power and automation technologies. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
FirstName LastName
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Top answer
Hi Uncle Mat, Your letter looks great, just a few minor corrections that I did below: Dear Sirs, I am writing to express my interest in the post advertised by your company for a Laboratory Engineer of CompanyName , as it precisely fits my career plans. I have enclosed my resume so that you can become familiar with my qualifications in the field of metrology and laboratory work. D.
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Hi Uncle Mat,
Your letter looks great, just a few minor corrections that I did below:
Dear Sirs,
I am writing to express my interest in the post advertised by your company for a Laboratory Engineer of CompanyName, as it precisely fits my career plans. I have enclosed my resume so that you can become familiar with my qualifications in the field of metrology and laboratory w
Your letter looks great, just a few minor corrections that I did below:
Dear Sirs,
I am writing to express my interest in the post advertised by your company for a Laboratory Engineer of CompanyName, as it precisely fits my career plans. I have enclosed my resume so that you can become familiar with my qualifications in the field of metrology and laboratory w
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Thank you very much, Shi Aina 
I appreciate your help.
Sincerely,
Uncle Mat
I appreciate your help.
Sincerely,
Uncle Mat
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