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LemonTree Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Motivation letter

Hi
I want you please to check my letter of motivation because I want t apply to a University:

“What would I do after?” That was the question reasoning on my mind while I was in high School. However, I had the answer since my childhood where I showed a great passion of computer science, but the question was deeper than that, which institutions should I integrate?

Discovering and choosing a university that fulfills all of my needs was a rigorous and delicate task. After several researches and having read informations, I discovered that Alakhawayn University emerged as the best choice for me. I knew that studying in such a University known for its critical role on students’ future and its quality program was going to ensure me that I will be lead to a better career.
AUI is also the only institution in Morocco who offers differents programs inspired from American Universities where student have the chance to embrace numerous opportunities. Furthermore, AUI is based on a well education strategies ...( I must add another sentence, but I have no idea)

Indeed, many of Alakhawayn student were happily satisfied by their teachers and the way they are learning, they also particularly appreciated the close relationships between the professors and students, and the (give me a word) atmosphere of work.

I have always wanted to be an Engineer, and AUI offer a good program that matches with my wishes. (please I need some inspiration help me to finish this letter)
  

Top answer

LemonTree & Soufiane: Why don't we finish one letter first? And why don't we just stick to ONE NAME? You are not the only person requesting assistance.

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LemonTree & Soufiane:

Why don't we finish one letter first? And why don't we just stick to ONE NAME? You are not the only person requesting assistance.

I am tempted to let you finish all your letters on your own.

As far as your post above is concerend, you already have been given good advice on how to proceed.

Good luck.

MountainHiker
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Oh, I am sorry, I didn't wanted to bother you with another motivation essay for application in a Aplication here in morocco. I wanted some one else to help me.
Because this essay is different from the other, it's not the same topic

the topic of this one:
"Why do you wish to join AUI " ?

I think it's less complicated than the other. that's why I posted here