Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
mot letter: I really need help with the third and "last" part of it
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01 b 00 Im going to apply for the course of International Business at the University of Maastricht. Im not a native speaker so it is kind of hard for me to express myself in english. I think the third part of my mot letter (why am i the right person for the university, why i want to go there...) is way to short. Maybe you can help me with it or give me some ideas for it. 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 Thanks a lot 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 Björn 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 """""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""" 02 br
00 Due to my interest for business and my passion of travelling and 02 br
00 international experiences, I feel that the International Business course at 02 br
00 the University of Maastricht offers a grand opportunity for me to attain my 02 br
00 goal of becoming a MY HARD CORE GOAL HERE: IT MUST SEEM GOAL ORIENTED 02 br
00 AND NOT JUST “OH I THINK BUSINESS IS LIKE….SUPER COOL”. I find the 02 br
00 “problem based learning” method expressed on the open day highly effective 02 br
00 as I believe that one can learn best by doing. I am a dedicated and 02 br
00 motivated person who can bring valuable insight and experiences to the table 02 br
00 and work with an international group dynamically. 02 br
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00 Please find enclosed, …………… letters….etc 02 br
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00 I can be available for a follow-up interview at any time. 02 br
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00 Thank you for you attention in this matter. 02 br
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00 Sincerely, 02 br
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00 """"""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""" 02 b 0-
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01 b 00 Im going to apply for the course of International Business at the University of Maastricht. Im not a native speaker so it is kind of hard for me to express myself in english. I think the third part of my mot letter (why am i the right person for the university, why i want to go there...) is way to short. Maybe you can help me with it or give me some ideas for it. 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 Thanks a lot 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 Björn 02 b 02 br
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01 b 00 """""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""" 02 br
00 Due to my interest for business and my passion of travelling and 02 br
00 international experiences, I feel that the International Business course at 02 br
00 the University of Maastricht offers a grand opportunity for me to attain my 02 br
00 goal of becoming a MY HARD CORE GOAL HERE: IT MUST SEEM GOAL ORIENTED 02 br
00 AND NOT JUST “OH I THINK BUSINESS IS LIKE….SUPER COOL”. I find the 02 br
00 “problem based learning” method expressed on the open day highly effective 02 br
00 as I believe that one can learn best by doing. I am a dedicated and 02 br
00 motivated person who can bring valuable insight and experiences to the table 02 br
00 and work with an international group dynamically. 02 br
02 br
00 Please find enclosed, …………… letters….etc 02 br
02 br
00 I can be available for a follow-up interview at any time. 02 br
02 br
00 Thank you for you attention in this matter. 02 br
02 br
00 Sincerely, 02 br
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00 """"""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""" 02 b 0-
Top answer
0 The paragraph looks okay to me. I'd fix these, however: 02 br 02 br 00 I 01 b 00 can be 02 b 00 available for a follow-up interview at any time. 02 br 02 br 00 Thank you for 01 b 00 you 02 b 00 attention in this matter.
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0 The paragraph looks okay to me. I'd fix these, however: 02 br
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00 I 01 b 00 can be 02 b 00 available for a follow-up interview at any time. 02 br
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00 Thank you for 01 b 00 you 02 b 00 attention in this matter. 0-
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00 I 01 b 00 can be 02 b 00 available for a follow-up interview at any time. 02 br
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00 Thank you for 01 b 00 you 02 b 00 attention in this matter. 0-
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1 b 00 Due to my interest 01 font 00 in 02 font 00 business and my passion 01 font 00 for 02 font 00 travelling and 02 br
00 international experiences, I feel that the International Business course at 02 br
00 the University of Maastricht offers 01 font 00 an ide 02 f
00 international experiences, I feel that the International Business course at 02 br
00 the University of Maastricht offers 01 font 00 an ide 02 f
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