Eff Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Monument, commemorating his deeds
Should I add a comma before "commemorating"? Or change the word order? I´m not sure if the sentence is clear:
There is a monument to this patriot near commemorating his brave deeds.
Thank you for your opinion.
There is a monument to this patriot near commemorating his brave deeds.
Thank you for your opinion.
Top answer
Hi, Should I add a comma before "commemorating"? Or change the word order? I´m not sure if the sentence is clear: There is a monument to this patriot near Stirling commemorating his brave deeds.
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Hi,
Should I add a comma before "commemorating"? Or change the word order? I´m not sure if the sentence is clear:
There is a monument to this patriot near Stirling commemorating his brave deeds.
The two -ing's close together are not good style.
I suggest this.
There is a monument to this patriot near Stirling which commemorates his brave deeds.
Or
Should I add a comma before "commemorating"? Or change the word order? I´m not sure if the sentence is clear:
There is a monument to this patriot near Stirling commemorating his brave deeds.
The two -ing's close together are not good style.
I suggest this.
There is a monument to this patriot near Stirling which commemorates his brave deeds.
Or
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