Mobile Application Grammar

Question

I am thinking, could I ask you to go through a small application and point out the misspelled, grammatically and conceptually incorrect words?

I uploaded the screens to dropbox(https://www.dropbox.com/sh/4kvk6ovurmssc7a/RHSkHM1um2), the application is small only contains max 50 words. I can send you promotion-code if you have iOS device.

Thanks for your help!

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

"A Good Morning"
"Birdie" (not Birdy)
"Brodyquest" ?
"DethKlok" ?
Your average sleep time (not length)
REM (Always caps)
Sleep Time (not in March)
Quality (not Qualities)
REM Count

Developers · Answer

Thank you AlpheccaStars!

BRODYQUEST is an animated music video featuring an exploitable image of actor Adrien Brody going about his normal day set to catchy music.

DethKlok is a band name

. May I ask which is the better form on the 9th screen "Length" or "Lengths" ? How can I include March on the 10th screen? You said the I should change to Sleep Time without in March, but that chart shows the sleep times on march.

Thanks for your help,

It's very kind of you.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

developersYou said the I should change to Sleep Time without in March, but that chart shows the sleep times on march.

Because March is on the axis, and the time period shown is obvious. No need to repeat it. Also, what if the time period selected covers 2 months? (eg the week of April 28 shows dates in May.)

Legends do not use the plural... the fact that there are several instances shown is obvious.

Developers · Answer

Thanks for the advices. Actually that screen comes out only if you tap to the March header. If you tap to the top graph, the March is leaved out.
Example:

What do you think is it correct like this?
!
Ps: I've updated the screen with your correction, could you glance a rapid glance to them? Thanks!

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