Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
May any one help me this is my first 2 phargarphs for my motivation letter plzzz let me know ur opinin
Dear Sir / Madam,
With this letter I would like to show my interest for this scholarship program at the University of xxxx. The main reason for the letter would be the fact I am studying a related career and I am hungry for more knowledge about this field of study. I am confident that this program will help me to gain wide knowledge.
On the 6th of June xxx, I, xxxxx was born in Alexandria, Egypt. Since I was a little child I wanted to travel and spend some time in foreign country and culture. Although I know that there might be a lot of cultural differences, due to my passion for meeting challenges I am willing to get to know this new country and see this as a chance to improve my competence and acquire new experience. The University of Wales Institute, Cardiff enjoys a high reputation all over the world, and this program also offers a unique opportunity to discover a completely different culture.
With this letter I would like to show my interest for this scholarship program at the University of xxxx. The main reason for the letter would be the fact I am studying a related career and I am hungry for more knowledge about this field of study. I am confident that this program will help me to gain wide knowledge.
On the 6th of June xxx, I, xxxxx was born in Alexandria, Egypt. Since I was a little child I wanted to travel and spend some time in foreign country and culture. Although I know that there might be a lot of cultural differences, due to my passion for meeting challenges I am willing to get to know this new country and see this as a chance to improve my competence and acquire new experience. The University of Wales Institute, Cardiff enjoys a high reputation all over the world, and this program also offers a unique opportunity to discover a completely different culture.
Top answer
Hi! " as you are writing business/formal letter. At the moment I can't find any alternatives for what you ment cause I am also writing a business letter.
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Hi!
You can't say "I am hungry for more knowledge about..." as you are writing business/formal letter.
At the moment I can't find any alternatives for what you ment cause I am also writing a business letter.
Find another way of saying that...cause it just sounds weird!!!
Good luck!
You can't say "I am hungry for more knowledge about..." as you are writing business/formal letter.
At the moment I can't find any alternatives for what you ment cause I am also writing a business letter.
Find another way of saying that...cause it just sounds weird!!!
Good luck!
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