Marital Home

Hi, Please correct the following sentences. Thank you.

Shrieking horns, came then a blue train and

Home it carried you, your marital home.

There under new skies

You’d become a wife, a mom and grandma.

Stupefied, I’d still watched the train

Leaving on the rails all my love for you.

The moving devil now looked black not blue,

Showing the color of my mourning mind.