X-Plosiv Posted 21 years ago
Vocabulary
Little text, need a help
OK, i got some problems with this text, so could you just fix the grammar.
Thank you
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away
There was a rebel unite that had an agreement
With themeslf – to protect innoncent people
From a big danger leaded by dark jedi Darth Vader.
The unite was called Rogue Squadron,
Leaded by Wedge and Luke Skywalker,
And many brave men that were in it.
They`re mission was to save planets
From a Death Star, a powerful station
That could destroy whole world
With a single shot.
Your name is Dack Ralter, a young hero,
Who escaped Imperial prison when he was teenager,
And youre one of squad leaders in Rogue Squadron,
But will you be enough brave to save people from death,
Will show youre skills with X-Wing…
Thank you
A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away
There was a rebel unite that had an agreement
With themeslf – to protect innoncent people
From a big danger leaded by dark jedi Darth Vader.
The unite was called Rogue Squadron,
Leaded by Wedge and Luke Skywalker,
And many brave men that were in it.
They`re mission was to save planets
From a Death Star, a powerful station
That could destroy whole world
With a single shot.
Your name is Dack Ralter, a young hero,
Who escaped Imperial prison when he was teenager,
And youre one of squad leaders in Rogue Squadron,
But will you be enough brave to save people from death,
Will show youre skills with X-Wing…
Top answer
Try and sort out these problemlatic words (mainly spelling) then take another look and you might see the other couple of mistakes: unite themeslf innoncent leaded unite Leaded They`re youre youre
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Try and sort out these problemlatic words (mainly spelling) then take another look and you might see the other couple of mistakes:
unite themeslf innoncent leaded unite Leaded They`re youre youre
unite themeslf innoncent leaded unite Leaded They`re youre youre
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I'll offer a little extra general tip in addition to nona the brit's: Some nouns here need a preceding article, like 'a', 'an', or 'the'.
One [bonus] specific correction: the first word in the third line should be 'Among' not 'With'.
One [bonus] specific correction: the first word in the third line should be 'Among' not 'With'.
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