Coolcan Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Life Journey
This is a short essay about life, any comments or grammar fixes will be very much appreciated! Thanks in advance!!!
As an old Chinese poem goes, “men meet and part, feel happy and sad, just like the moon wax and wane”. This sentence, although does not capture the full meaning of life, does represent life as a bumpy rocky road.
A life journey is often full of happiness and sorrow; ups and downs; good times and bad times, this is especially true for the man with great achievement. In the beginning of his journey, he will often suffer from the pain of hitting to a dead-end, and only after striving can he find his way out. Perhaps, this is what we call, “after the darkness comes the dawn”.
We read in all histories - great man is made by challenges. He who stands firm in the face of hardship and untold sufferings will make his way to success and victory.
As an old Chinese poem goes, “men meet and part, feel happy and sad, just like the moon wax and wane”. This sentence, although does not capture the full meaning of life, does represent life as a bumpy rocky road.
A life journey is often full of happiness and sorrow; ups and downs; good times and bad times, this is especially true for the man with great achievement. In the beginning of his journey, he will often suffer from the pain of hitting to a dead-end, and only after striving can he find his way out. Perhaps, this is what we call, “after the darkness comes the dawn”.
We read in all histories - great man is made by challenges. He who stands firm in the face of hardship and untold sufferings will make his way to success and victory.
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Hi coolcan;
I have made some suggestions.
As an old Chinese poem goes, “men meet and part, feel happy and sad, just like the moon waxes and wanes”. This sentence, although it does not capture the full meaning of life, does represent life as a bumpy rocky road.
A life journey is often full of happiness and sorrow, ups and downs, good times and ba
I have made some suggestions.
As an old Chinese poem goes, “men meet and part, feel happy and sad, just like the moon waxes and wanes”. This sentence, although it does not capture the full meaning of life, does represent life as a bumpy rocky road.
A life journey is often full of happiness and sorrow, ups and downs, good times and ba
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