Letter to Employer - New Zelaand

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Please correct below y letter to my employer. The situation is that my New Zealand Work Permit will epxire in september and I want to get a new permit before it expires so taht I don;t have the stop working. New Zelaand Immigration needs the documents to process my work permit application so I need this documents from my employer if ever they will continue my employment with them. Here is my letter. Than you very much

May 22,2009

TO: EMPLOYER'S NAME & ADDRESS

FROM: EMPLOYEE'S NAME AND ADDRESS

Dear Mr. ____ ,
I am writing this letter to inform you that my work permit will expire on Sept __, 2009. In order for me to process my work permit with New Zealand Immigration, I do request the following document.
1. Employer's Supplementary Form
2. Job Offer
3. Employment Contract.

Thank you very much.

Sincerely Yours,

employee

Cwtch · Accepted Answer

Dear Mr. __ ,

~~I am writing this letter to inform you that~~ My work permit will expire on Sept __, 2009. In order for me to process my work permit with New Zealand Immigration, I ~~do request~~ need the following documents:
1. Employer's Supplementary Form
2. Job Offer
3. Employment Contract.

Thank you in advance for helping me obtain these documents.

Sincerely Yours,

employee

Anonymous · Answer

hI,  tHANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR REPLY.  i WOULD ALSO LIKE TO ASK YOU HELP IF YOU CAN ADD ON THIS CORRECTED LETTER OF MINE. MY CURRENT JOB DESCRIPTION IS A "LABORER"  BUT MY NEW JOB DESCRIPTION IS AN "AUTO MECHANIC". I NEED HELP ON ADDING SOMETHING IN MY LETTER THAT SYAS I DO NEED THE DUCOMENTS FOR MY NEW JOB DESCRIPTION AS A AUTO MECHANIC.  THANK YOU VERY MUCH IN ADVANCE,   I ALSO WANT TO ADD IN THE LETTER

Cwtch · Answer

hI, tHANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR REPLY. i WOULD ALSO LIKE TO ASK for YOUr HELP. ~~IF YOU CAN~~ Will you please ADD ONto THIS CORRECTED LETTER OF MINE. MY CURRENT JOB DESCRIPTION IS A "LABORER" BUT MY NEW JOB DESCRIPTION IS AN "AUTO MECHANIC". I ~~NEED HELP ON~~ want to ADD~~ING~~ SOMETHING IN MY LETTER THAT SYAS I DO NEED THE DUCOMENTS (I do not understand what you are trying to say here.) FOR MY NEW JOB DESCRIPTION AS An AUTO MECHANIC. THANK YOU VERY MUCH IN ADVANCE, I ALSO WANT TO ADD IN THE LETTER ???

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Dear Mr. __ ,

My work permit will expire on Sept __, 2009. In order for me to process my work permit with New Zealand Immigration, I need the following documents:
1. Employer's Supplementary Form
2. Job Offer
3. Employment Contract.

Please be aware that my job description will be changing on (date) and I ...try it yourself and I will check it.

Thank you in advance for helping me obtain these documents.

Sincerely Yours,

employee

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Anonymous · Answer

Hi,

Thank you very much for your reply. Here is the revised letter I made. Please correct and add someting to it. Thanks a lot.

Date: June 04, 2009

To: Employer

From: Employee

Dear Mr. Employer,

I am writing this letter to inform you that my work permit will expire on September 8, 2009. In order for me to process my work permit with New Zealand Immigration, I need the following documents:

1. Employer’s Supplementary Form

2. Job Offer

3. Employment Contract

Please be aware that my current job description as a Laborer will be change to Auto Mechanic when I lodge my work permit.

Thank you in advance for helping me obtain these documents.

Sincerely Yours,

Employee

Letter to Employer - New Zelaand

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