Innerlife Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Letter to a professor(Please revise my letter)
Hi there everyone,
I'm Rachel. I want to write a letter to a professor whom I'm not familiar with. I've got some questiones while studying Literature and I want to ask him for some help.
I want to make my email more formal one.But since my first language is not English, I found it's really hard for me to do that. I paste my letter below. I was wondering if anyone could kindly revise it for me?
I do apprieate for your time and help!
Rachel
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Dear Dr. ___,
I'm Rachel *.I'm a year-4 student from *.These days I'm studying Agha Shahid Ali 's work "***",and I found your blog by chance.
Thank you for your article "Ghazalesque: Agha Shahid Ali, Kashmiri-American Poet ".It lets me know more about Ali and his contribution to ghazals.
Regarding Agha Shahid Ali's poem "***", I was wondering if you could give me some help. There are questiones I'm not quite clear:why Ali mentioned about "amputation"in the midle of the poem?Does the amputation have any relationship to the two persons(the author and his grandmother)in the poem?
Thank you for your time and for any comments you may give me.
Best wishes!
Your Sincerely,
Rachel Li
I'm Rachel. I want to write a letter to a professor whom I'm not familiar with. I've got some questiones while studying Literature and I want to ask him for some help.
I want to make my email more formal one.But since my first language is not English, I found it's really hard for me to do that. I paste my letter below. I was wondering if anyone could kindly revise it for me?
I do apprieate for your time and help!
Rachel
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Dear Dr. ___,
I'm Rachel *.I'm a year-4 student from *.These days I'm studying Agha Shahid Ali 's work "***",and I found your blog by chance.
Thank you for your article "Ghazalesque: Agha Shahid Ali, Kashmiri-American Poet ".It lets me know more about Ali and his contribution to ghazals.
Regarding Agha Shahid Ali's poem "***", I was wondering if you could give me some help. There are questiones I'm not quite clear:why Ali mentioned about "amputation"in the midle of the poem?Does the amputation have any relationship to the two persons(the author and his grandmother)in the poem?
Thank you for your time and for any comments you may give me.
Best wishes!
Your Sincerely,
Rachel Li
Top answer
Hi, Dear Dr. ___ , I am a fourth year student in the BA program at *. I am currently studying Agha Shahid Ali 's work, and I found your blog by chance.
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Hi,
Dear Dr. ___,
I am a fourth year student in the BA program at *. I am currently studying Agha Shahid Ali 's work, and I found your blog by chance.
Thank you for your article "Ghazalesque: Agha Shahid Ali, Kashmiri-American Poet ". It gives me a great deal of useful information about Ali and his contribution to ghazals. Does this word need a
Dear Dr. ___,
I am a fourth year student in the BA program at *. I am currently studying Agha Shahid Ali 's work, and I found your blog by chance.
Thank you for your article "Ghazalesque: Agha Shahid Ali, Kashmiri-American Poet ". It gives me a great deal of useful information about Ali and his contribution to ghazals. Does this word need a
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