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IMTB Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Letter of Motivation

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00im applying for an unversity. i would appreciate if you check this one. it isnt finished yet....02br
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01span00Dear Madam or Sir,02span02br
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00I am writing regarding my application for the 00International Business and Management Studies program. While gathering information in a study forum, I found some interesting subjects about your university. 02br
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00I graduated a special program “European-Business-Class” at the Berufskolleg ***** Business School. The emphases of my program were international business, English, additional language (Spanish) and a practical course in England for 2 weeks. In addition to my education, I accomplished a practical course at an international advertising00 agency (BBDO). 02br
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00I’m an internationally orients men, that’s why I chose the 00Berufskolleg ***** Business School and BBDO. And that’s why I got focused on your university. English and business are some of my largest passions. Considering your business reputation and your international background, I am sure your university is the perfect match for me.02br
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00i'm not sure about the formulation02br
00i think it may be a lil bit too much....pushing too strong.....what u thinking?0-
  

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just wanted to work out some ideas02br 02br 01span 00Dear Madam or Sir,02span 02br 02br 01span 02span 02br 02br 00I am writing regarding my application for the 00International Business and Management Studies program. While gathering information in a study forum, I found some interesting subjects about your university. 02br 02br 00I graduated a special program “European-Business-Class” at the Berufskolleg Neuss Business School.

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0 here an update....pls help someone...im not sure about formulations....02br
00and i know it got to be sorted...just wanted to work out some ideas02br
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01span00Dear Madam or Sir,02span02br
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00I am writing regarding
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1font00Dear Madam or Sir, 02font00I'm not sure about this saluation. Do you have the name of the person in charge of the program?01font00 02font02br
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01font00I am writing regarding my application for the 00International Business and Management Studies program. W
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0 01b00 00Grammar Geek02b00 i thank you very much for your help....02br
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00would not have thought i can make this much mistakes 05002br
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00well after your input and some things by me....here we go....what do you think?02br
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00im not sure about the salution. dont have any names....just "Internati
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