Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Letter Writing
Letter of Intent for Grad School
I have a letter of intent for a Master's in Health Informatics, would someone be willing to giving me feedback? This is my first draft. Thanks!!!
ATTN: Graduate Selection Committee
I am writing to express my sincere interests in the Health Care Informatics Master’s Program at the University of XXXXXXX. I currently hold my Bachelors of Science in Family, Youth and Community Sciences from the University of XXXXXX.
During my undergraduate career, I have upheld a fitting GPA all while working a full time, long-term job in a leadership role. My degree in Family, Youth, and Community Sciences has sharpened my communication, planning and evaluation skills and through my occupation, I believe my decision-making skills and leadership abilities have grown. However, I am interested in further advancing my knowledge.
I believe this program, Health Care Informatics, will provide me with the curriculum so that I may enhance my skills in order to better serve my future career in health care as I see myself as a management specialists working with clinicians and administrators to develop clear and effective health information strategies for health care institutes.
I find this program to be extremely flexible which will allow me to hold my current position as a general manager all while giving me the opportunity to further advance my educational goals. I find Health Care Informatics to be intriguing as this new field will mix technology and medical, two fields I feel are both long lasting and stable career paths. I feel with my management skills and a Master’s degree in Health Care Informatics I will have an advantage in this industry. I am looking forward to a path of a long-term career in a health care profession.
Thank you for considering my application. It would be an honor to continue my educational career and pursue a degree in an emerging field at the University of XXXXXX.
Sincerely,
XXXXX XXXXXXXX
ATTN: Graduate Selection Committee
I am writing to express my sincere interests in the Health Care Informatics Master’s Program at the University of XXXXXXX. I currently hold my Bachelors of Science in Family, Youth and Community Sciences from the University of XXXXXX.
During my undergraduate career, I have upheld a fitting GPA all while working a full time, long-term job in a leadership role. My degree in Family, Youth, and Community Sciences has sharpened my communication, planning and evaluation skills and through my occupation, I believe my decision-making skills and leadership abilities have grown. However, I am interested in further advancing my knowledge.
I believe this program, Health Care Informatics, will provide me with the curriculum so that I may enhance my skills in order to better serve my future career in health care as I see myself as a management specialists working with clinicians and administrators to develop clear and effective health information strategies for health care institutes.
I find this program to be extremely flexible which will allow me to hold my current position as a general manager all while giving me the opportunity to further advance my educational goals. I find Health Care Informatics to be intriguing as this new field will mix technology and medical, two fields I feel are both long lasting and stable career paths. I feel with my management skills and a Master’s degree in Health Care Informatics I will have an advantage in this industry. I am looking forward to a path of a long-term career in a health care profession.
Thank you for considering my application. It would be an honor to continue my educational career and pursue a degree in an emerging field at the University of XXXXXX.
Sincerely,
XXXXX XXXXXXXX
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The guideline is to revise by elimination of unnecessary text; be direct and specific. Letter of Intent I am writing to express my interest in the Health Care Informatics Master’s Program at the University of X. I currently hold my Bachelor of Science in Family, Youth and Community Sciences from the University of Y.
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The guideline is to revise by elimination of unnecessary text; be direct and specific.
Letter of Intent
I am writing to express my interest in the Health Care Informatics Master’s Program at the University of X. I currently hold my Bachelor of Science in Family, Youth and Community Sciences from the University of Y.
During my undergraduate studies,
Letter of Intent
I am writing to express my interest in the Health Care Informatics Master’s Program at the University of X. I currently hold my Bachelor of Science in Family, Youth and Community Sciences from the University of Y.
During my undergraduate studies,
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