The following Letter for placing order needs improvement in order to be a perfect letter. I am seeking help of you people to let me understand this letter well and also to understand writing letters with proffetional approch. I desperately need your valuable advice and suggestions. Sorry for my spelling mistakes please correct them out as well.
Date: 5th Sept '06
To, Mr. Mantu Ghosh,
Dear Sir,
Enclose please find one Banders Cheque of State Bank of India (Commercial Branch) bearing no. 12345 dated:4th Sept'06 amounting Rs.100.00 respectively towards the order followed:
1. RCV 11 : 150 Pcs
2. RCV 12 : 200 Pcs
3. RCV 13 : 500 Pcs
Kindly acknowledge the same and arrange to deliver the courier at the earliest.
Thanking you,
Yours truly, For Siliguri Builders Ltd.
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If you want me to correct your letters, etc, Himadri, then please post them in simple text without the HTML coding. That makes it very difficult to edit.