Vsuresh Posted 11 years ago
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Subject: Problems in finding Guarantor
Respected Sir
I would like you to help me with the situation I am facing now. I have received a loan of Qr. 3500 from the school to pay the deposit money and rent for the accommodation I am to move in on the 26th of June, on the agreement that I will repay it in three installments to the tune of Qr. 1166 a month.
As per the agreement I will have paid two installments before I leave this country my home country India for summer vacation on 28th June 2015. I promise that I will repay the third installment in September 2015 when I will have reported back to work after summer vacation
Since I am leaving for home country for summer vacation the 28th June, the School Accounts Department is asking me to provide an undertaking from a person who is here during the summer vacation mentioning that he or she will pay the sum equivalent to the third installment Qr.1166 in case I fail to pay it.
As all my friends whom I have known here for the past six years, are leaving for India for summer vacation, I am in a helpless situation and as I will have to spend a considerable sum for moving my house and a sum close to Qr. 2500 is going to be deducted towards the first and the second installments of the loan, it would be very difficult for me to pay off the third installment before I leave for my country for summer vacation.
Please consider my situation and help me.
Thank you for kind consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Subject: Problems in finding Guarantor
Respected Sir
I would like you to help me with the situation I am facing now. I have received a loan of Qr. 3500 from the school to pay the deposit money and rent for the accommodation I am to move in on the 26th of June, on the agreement that I will repay it in three installments to the tune of Qr. 1166 a month.
As per the agreement I will have paid two installments before I leave this country my home country India for summer vacation on 28th June 2015. I promise that I will repay the third installment in September 2015 when I will have reported back to work after summer vacation
Since I am leaving for home country for summer vacation the 28th June, the School Accounts Department is asking me to provide an undertaking from a person who is here during the summer vacation mentioning that he or she will pay the sum equivalent to the third installment Qr.1166 in case I fail to pay it.
As all my friends whom I have known here for the past six years, are leaving for India for summer vacation, I am in a helpless situation and as I will have to spend a considerable sum for moving my house and a sum close to Qr. 2500 is going to be deducted towards the first and the second installments of the loan, it would be very difficult for me to pay off the third installment before I leave for my country for summer vacation.
Please consider my situation and help me.
Thank you for kind consideration.
Yours sincerely,
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Subject: Waiver of payment guarantor Dear Sir , I would like you to help me with the situation I am facing now. I have received a loan of Qr. 3500 from the school to pay the deposit money and rent for the accommodation I am to mov ing to in on the 26th of 26 June, on the agreement condition that I will repay it that amount in three installments to the tune of Qr.
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Subject: Waiver of payment guarantor
Dear Sir,
I would like you to help me with the situation I am facing now. I have received a loan of Qr. 3500 from the school to pay the deposit money and rent for the accommodation I am to moving to in on the 26th of 26 June, on the agreement
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Respected Sir
I would like you to help me with the situation I am facing now. I have received a loan of Qr. 3500 from the school to pay the deposit money and rent for the accommodation I am to move into on the 26th of June, on the agreement that I will repay it in three installmentsto the tune (informal and unnecessary) of Qr. 1166 a month.
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I would like you to help me with the situation I am facing now. I have received a loan of Qr. 3500 from the school to pay the deposit money and rent for the accommodation I am to move into on the 26th of June, on the agreement that I will repay it in three installments
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Thank you very much to both of you.
The changes are very helpful to me.
The changes are very helpful to me.
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