Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
Language arts part 2
How would this sentence be rewrote? The precaution to be taken by the consumer include care in buying, storing,handling, and cooking food. If it started off with care and buying
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Other than changing to a plural, what revision are you looking for? The statement "If it started off with care and buying" is unclear. The precautions to be taken by the consumer include care in buying, storing, handling, and cooking food.
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Other than changing to a plural, what revision are you looking for? The statement "If it started off with care and buying" is unclear.
The precautions to be taken by the consumer include care in buying, storing, handling, and cooking food.
If you want to put this into an active form, I would write:
The consumer needs to use care in buying, storing, handling, and cooki
The precautions to be taken by the consumer include care in buying, storing, handling, and cooking food.
If you want to put this into an active form, I would write:
The consumer needs to use care in buying, storing, handling, and cooki
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