Ofrienfdragon Posted 19 years ago
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Knowledge acquirement
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00 Knowledge acquirement is mainly a process of your own. A good environment, voluminous books and even other aids, such as having the enlightening instructions of excellent teachers and friends, do not necessarily turn scholar in you, even if you do have benefited much from them. Instead, many stories behind prominent learners tell us that these people are not gifted with these conditions. Sticking at your work is always the dominant factor to success. Not being ready for the learning hardships, many people have failed to undergo them and therefore they can’t enjoy the pleasure of dominating the valley of knowledge. 02 br
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00 Knowledge acquirement is mainly a process of your own. A good environment, voluminous books and even other aids, such as having the enlightening instructions of excellent teachers and friends, do not necessarily turn scholar in you, even if you do have benefited much from them. Instead, many stories behind prominent learners tell us that these people are not gifted with these conditions. Sticking at your work is always the dominant factor to success. Not being ready for the learning hardships, many people have failed to undergo them and therefore they can’t enjoy the pleasure of dominating the valley of knowledge. 02 br
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01 cite 10 Ofrienfdragon 12 cite 10 Knowledge 11 b 10 acquirement 12 b 10 is mainly a process of your own 11 b 10 (your own what?) 12 b 10 . A good environment, voluminous books and even other aids, such as having the enlightening instructions of excellent teachers and f
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