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Yusufgalle Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

Kindly re-write this in an actractive way

0Dear Sirs, 02br
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00Keeping in view the demand of many travelers, I have decided to open a Tour Operating office in Sri Lanka, which will start functioning at the Beautiful city of Galle. 02br
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00Thus, seeking a respectful travel organizer, who would like to cooperate with me from your country by organizing & directing travelers to the blooming market of travel & tourism in Sri Lanka. 02br
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00The groups visiting the country will be handled by an expertise, and a dedicated team from our office to Make their holyday a truly memorable and as unforgettable one. 02br
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00Kindly contact me for further details. 02br
00Hope to hear a progressive reply from your side. 02br
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00Thank you 02br
00Yours sincerely 02br
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00sulekan 02br
00(Proprietor) 02br
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0 Hi Yusufgalle, 02br 02br 00To whom are you writing the letter? The style really depends on who is going to read it - for example you would need a different style depending upon whether you were writing to a bank manager, or to a travel agent to introduce them to your new company. 050010id1

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0 Hi Yusufgalle, 02br
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00To whom are you writing the letter? The style really depends on who is going to read it - for example you would need a different style depending upon whether you were writing to a bank manager, or to a travel agent to introduce them to your new company. 050010id1
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0 Hi abbie, 02br
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00I wish to make some Business Cotacts by sending this letter to travel agencies & operators. 02br
00Please help me to draft this letter adding your ideas. 02br
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00Dear Sirs, 02br
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00Keeping in view the demand of many travelers, I have decided to open a To
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0 Dear Sirs 02br
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00A new Tour Operating Service is about to open in the beautiful state of Sri Lanka. We will be based in the historic city of Galle, a World Heritage Site. 02br
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00 The city itself has much to offer, from the narrow streets of the old town, to the bustling markets and the historic buildings and museums. The beaches are to the nort
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0 Hi abbie, 02br
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00Thank you very much for the letter 02br
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00best egards. 02br
00Sulekhan 0-
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