Anjali 07 Posted 6 years ago
Vocabulary

Kindly let me know if the sentence is correct or if can be corrected in better way ?

Dear XYZ,


As requested sharing with you, the Experience Certificate attached herewith.Whereas you can take the hardcopy, whenever you come to the office. Thanks & Regards
  

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Whereas you can take the hardcopy, whenever you come to the office. Thanks & Regards That is very obtuse and obscure writing. It uses complicated, somewhat antiquated and old-fashioned vocabulary that does not serve for clear communications.

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Anjali 07As requested sharing with you, the Experience Certificate attached herewith.Whereas you can take the hardcopy, whenever you come to the office. Thanks & Regards

That is very obtuse and obscure writing. It uses complicated, somewhat antiquated and old-fashioned vocabulary that does not serve for clear communications. You may think that you are being