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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Kill two birds with one stone? Is this really works?

0Could you check the sentence and correct my mistakes?02br
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00I like reading books while TV’s on.02br
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00I am normally hearing the TV while my eyes are on the book, and watch TV only when I find the scene is really interesting and worse to watch it.02br
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00I believe this way of spending time saves some of mine, for instance, when I want to do excise, rent DVD and need some shopping, I just walk up to the rental shop and do the shopping on the way home.02br
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00However, I got headache by doing that today, also not sure if that is really effective, might loosing some concentration.02br
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0Thanks Feebs 11. I don't rememver where I saw but I read somewhere that "to" can be used after "worth". Is it a rule valid for something else or do I completely make it up?0-
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0 I have never met that usage - perhaps you have confused it with something else?0-
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0Perhaps you're thinking of "worth 01i00it02i00 to do something"0-
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0Hmm, probably.0-
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00Thank you Doll to correct my many mistakes, and comments for other guys. 00Though, still not sure when I should use” 01b00;02b00” insted of “,”.02br
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