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Chivalry Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Isn't the grammar here a little messed-up?

I'm referring to the sentence below,

"Smashing the guitar of someone singing a cloying love song is way too exciting for me."

That sounds just so grammatically incorrect to me, as it's supposed to be "Smashing the guitar of someone who singing a cloying love song's is way too exciting to me."

Am I right, though?
  

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chivalry Am I right, though? The original sounds fine to me. " Either "'s" or "is" not both.

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chivalryAm I right, though?
The original sounds fine to me.

There are some problems with your suggested replacement:

"Smashing the guitar of someone who is singing a cloying love song's is way too exciting to me."