Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
Is this sentence grammatically correct?
When I signed up to serve this country joining the military, I didn't know if I was going to be assigned to a unit that was deploying right away. I didn't know anything. I could have been assigned to the unit that was deploying right after I got to the unit.
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When I signed up to serve this country in the military, I didn't know if I was going to be assigned to a unit that was deploying right away. I didn't know anything. I could have been assigned to a unit that was deploying right after I joined it.
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When I signed up to serve this country in the military, I didn't know if I was going to be assigned to a unit that was deploying right away. I didn't know anything. I could have been assigned to a unit that was deploying right after I joined it.
The grammar is now OK, but it is very redundant.
The grammar is now OK, but it is very redundant.
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