Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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A small part of Grayden’s host caught up with the rebel forces near Nalis Aren, but were quickly defeated. During the fight, an arrow struck Alhana’s horse, and the elf woman was thrown and knocked unconscious after receiving a serious head injury. Porthios immediately went to Alhana’s aid, but found he was unable to heal her. A mysterious priest then appeared out of the forest and offered his help to Porthios. The elf leader told the priest that he would pledge his continued service to the rebellion and freeing the elves if the priest would save Alhana. After the priest revealed that he was a god, he healed Alhana and disappeared.
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Some of Grayden’s host caught up with the rebel forces near Nalis Aren, but were quickly defeated. During the fight, an arrow struck Alhana’s horse, and the elf woman was thrown and knocked unconscious. Porthios went to her aid but was unable to heal her.
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Some of Grayden’s host caught up with the rebel forces near Nalis Aren, but were quickly defeated. During the fight, an arrow struck Alhana’s horse, and the elf woman was thrown and knocked unconscious. Porthios went to her aid but was unable to heal her. A mysterious priest then appeared from the forest and offered his help. The elf leader told the priest tha
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