Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Is this paragraph worded in the correct way?
FYI- Dmitra is the governor. Dmitra’s agents completed the necessary actions to ensure that Samas was elected, and after the governor used her magic to personally spy on the common people of Eltabbar, she secretly ordered her spymaster, Malark Springhill, to journey to the town of Surthay to learn the truth about the battle in the Gorge of Gauros. Originally from the cities and settlements of the Moonsea, Malark was gifted with eternal youth due to a potion that he had acquired when he was a young man and had later become a Monk of the Long Death. When Malark reached Surthay, he questioned several of the soldiers who participated in the fight against the Rashemi and eventually discovered what had actually happened after using force against one of the men, who he then killed.
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cboutin3 who m he then killed. Some would insist on this form. I sometimes use it and sometimes not, largely depending on my audience.
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cboutin3whom he then killed.Some would insist on this form. I sometimes use it and sometimes not, largely depending on my audience.
I think I'd use it here.
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