Kedra Posted 19 years ago
Business & Finance
Is this marketing text correct in grammar and style? Thanks!
1 i 00 The passage aims at convincing the owners of small vacation rental websites that making deals with local service providers is a good income opportunity for them. Can you please take a professional look of native speaker at my masterpiece? 05 0 00 Thank you in advance! 02 i 02 br
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01 font 00 The owners of small rental websites can cooperate with local service providers and get good commission from this cooperation. For instance, they can agree on discounts with souvenir shops and hand out discount coupons to their guests. Discount coupons issued specially for a specific villa or house work best. The same can be done with restaurants, car hire and yacht rent services, and etc. No doubt, this will contribute to generating interest and building trust to your vacation rental website. Will you mind having more happy clients, who naturally turn to positive testimonials and 02 font 01 font 00 word-of-mouth advertising? 02 font 00 00 010id 5
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01 b 01 font 00 The smaller your region, the more income opportunities you have 02 font 02 b 02 br
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01 font 00 The owners of small rental websites can cooperate with local service providers and get good commission from this cooperation. For instance, they can agree on discounts with souvenir shops and hand out discount coupons to their guests. Discount coupons issued specially for a specific villa or house work best. The same can be done with restaurants, car hire and yacht rent services, and etc. No doubt, this will contribute to generating interest and building trust to your vacation rental website. Will you mind having more happy clients, who naturally turn to positive testimonials and 02 font 01 font 00 word-of-mouth advertising? 02 font 00 00 010id 5
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1 font 00 The owners of small rental websites can cooperate with local service providers and get good commission from this cooperation. For instance, they can agree on discounts with souvenir shops and hand out discount coupons to their guests. Discount coupons issued specially for a specific villa or house work best.
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1 font 00 The owners of small rental websites can cooperate with local service providers and get good commission from this cooperation. For instance, they can agree on discounts with souvenir shops and hand out discount coupons to their guests. Discount coupons issued specially for a specific villa or house work best. The same can be done with restaurants, car hire and yac
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0 Hi Tidus, thank you very much for your suggestions and corrections. I guess I would agree with placing the last sentence in the beginning. I appreciate your sharing your thoughts on this. [Y] 0-
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