Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
Is this grammatically correct, and how can I make it flow better?
The arguments are as follows: (1) The issue of race relations should be handled by local leaders instead of “outsiders” like himself. (2) Negotiation is a better path. (3) The methods used by demonstrators are extreme and unjustified. (4) The demonstrations are “unwise and untimely.” and (5) The courts are dealing with the issues of civil rights; you all just need to be patient.
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With so many points, it is clearer to list them: The arguments are as follows: (1) Race relations should be handled by local leaders instead of outsiders like himself. (2) Negotiation is a better path. (3) The methods used by demonstrators are extreme and unjustified.
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With so many points, it is clearer to list them:
The arguments are as follows:
(1) Race relations should be handled by local leaders instead of outsiders like himself.
(2) Negotiation is a better path.
(3) The methods used by demonstrators are extreme and unjustified.
(4) The demonstrations are unwise and untimely.
(5) Just be
The arguments are as follows:
(1) Race relations should be handled by local leaders instead of outsiders like himself.
(2) Negotiation is a better path.
(3) The methods used by demonstrators are extreme and unjustified.
(4) The demonstrations are unwise and untimely.
(5) Just be
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