Fuchsia cpu 53 Posted 8 years ago
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Is this Email grammatically correct?

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Is this email grammatically correct?

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Hello, Hope all is well Could you please tell me if there is a way to delete my account with my credit card info?I no longer want to be a customer of your brand, and I want to delete my info ASAP. I had bad experiences ordering from Iherb and recently my negative review has been removed! I really don't appreciate the brand that doesn't respect their customers.Please delete my account ASAP. Thanks"
  

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Dear Sirs; Please delete my account and credit card information. I no longer want to shop with you because of not only my negative experiences, but also your deletion of my less than favorable review. Thank you for your prompt attention.

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Dear Sirs;

Please delete my account and credit card information. I no longer want to shop with you because of not only my negative experiences, but also your deletion of my less than favorable review.

Thank you for your prompt attention.