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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Is this a strong thesis statement?

Few people know that I am shy because outwardly I am a very sociable person. As I look back over my life I even question my own shyness.
  

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Hi, It doesn't seem to be. Are you shy or not? It leaves the matter unclear.

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Hi,

It doesn't seem to be. Are you shy or not? It leaves the matter unclear.


Think of a thesis as something you will try to prove in your essay.
In this case, what will you try to prove?