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I seemed intelligent using all these metaphors just by an eye. I am always grammatically correct!  I found these metaphors in an emotional cliché phrase. I deceived someone the other day when I was talking to them in different jargon. When I used alliterations I use a lot of inflated language.

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

I seemed intelligent using all these metaphors just by an eye. I am always grammatically correct! I found these metaphors in an emotional cliché phrase. I deceived someone the other day when I was talking to them in different jargon. When I used alliterations I use a lot of inflated language.

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I seemed intelligent <<< sounds like you are not intelligent in reality

using all these metaphors

just by an eye. <<< what does this mean?

I am always grammatically correct!

I found these metaphors

in an emotional cliché phrase. <<< unclear, say it another way

I deceived someone the other day <<< how is this connected to your earlier statements?

when I was talking to them

in different jargon. <<< what do you mean?

When I used alliterations I use a lot of inflated language.

Your sentences do not seen to relate to a single, clear idea.

Best wishes, Clive

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