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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Is the line natural?

Hi. Is the underscored line natural in the conversation? Thank you.


Bartender: What's wrong?

Man: Why would something be wrong?

Bartender: You've been sitting here drinking for a couple hours. It looks pretty intense.

Man: It does?

Bartender: Yeah. So what's wrong?

Man: My girl just left me.

Bartender: Sorry to hear that.

  

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anonymous Is the underscored line natural in the conversation? It doesn't sound right to me. I'm not used to using "intense" in that way.

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anonymousIs the underscored line natural in the conversation?

It doesn't sound right to me. I'm not used to using "intense" in that way.

I might say "serious" instead or change the whole sentence to "Why so glum?".

CJ