Yobib Nartea Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

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The purpose of this mini-survey is to record the quantitative data in terms of pedestrian safety along King's Drive and Freedman Crescent. There was a slightly lower respondent willing to participate due to their given reason.
  

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Yobib Nartea a slightly lower respondent willing to participate This part makes the least sense of it all. Did you leave out something? a slightly lower response rate?

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Yobib Narteaa slightly lower respondent willing to participate
This part makes the least sense of it all. Did you leave out something?

a slightly lower response rate?
a slightly lower number of respondents than expected?
_________

Also, I can't see how the purpose of a survey would be to record data. Recording data is