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Misty77 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Is it OK?

As the housing slump has unfolded across the United States, California, Florida, Nevada and Arizona have been impacted the most by foreclosures.

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misty77 As the housing slump has unfolded across the United States, California, Florida, Nevada and Arizona have been impacted the most by foreclosures. There's no way to know where one clause stops and the next begins without knowing US geography! You need something to show more clearly the structure of the clauses.

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misty77As the housing slump has unfolded across the United States, California, Florida, Nevada and Arizona have been impacted the most by foreclosures.
There's no way to know where one clause stops and the next begins without knowing US geography! You need something to show more clearly the structure of the clauses.

As the housing slump has unfo
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