Sali Sadegh Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

is it correct?

Following the email message dated Saturday, December 24, 2013 which I sent you I will be thankful if you kindly let me know your decision. In addition I attached the mentioned proposal that I’ve said in the last email.
  

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The following email I sent you on Saturday, December 24th. I have also attached the proposal that I mentioned in that email. I would be grateful if you could let me know your decision.

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The following email I sent you on Saturday, December 24th. I have also attached the proposal that I mentioned in that email. I would be grateful if you could let me know your decision.

However, December 24th was a Tuesday, so you need to change either the day or the date.