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Piplot Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is correct? About a movie review

It stars a guy about who no one outside of his family (and hometown) know much about him, and was done for a budget of around $30 million. That combination of elements adds up to one of the best sci-fi films of the decade and one of the most entertaining movies of 2009.

Is correct the grammar teachers? Thanks in advance.
  

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I'd say, It stars a character who is little known outside his family and hometown. and I'd also break the first sentence into two, since there are two separate thoughts. The film was made with a budget of around $30 million.

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I'd say,

It stars a character who is little known outside his family and hometown.

and I'd also break the first sentence into two, since there are two separate thoughts.

The film was made with a budget of around $30 million.

It would sound better to say,

This combination of elements...

but honestly I think i
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Ha Ha true Emotion: stick out tongue. Thanks teacher.