Christine Christie Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Including

Is this sentence correct:



"Any celebrity won't find any obstacles if they want to publish a book, including if the book has poor quality."




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THANK YOU.

  

Top answer

It's understandable, but it's not how English speakers would express it. No celebrity will have trouble getting a book published, even if it's not very good. ) CJ

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It's understandable, but it's not how English speakers would express it.

No celebrity will have trouble getting a book published, even if it's not very good.

(The combination "including if" doesn't work well.)

CJ