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Osmancataloluk Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

If you, my mentors, would have a chnce to correct my sentence I would be thankful, regards

As the wall separates the gardens of the two houses, it also hides whatever happens in the garden from the eyes outside.
  

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It's ok.

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Thank you very much and good night my dear mentor;
If you do not mind I have another related sentences, do you want me to continue here or put in on the forums. I prefer you take alook at it but what can I say?
regards
osman
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It's best that when you have a new topic or a different sentence, start a new thread.
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I put it on a new thread already as I guessed you would say so.
thanks
and if you would check you would see my dear mentor.
regards
osman